1. One Of Us - Accept your destiny!
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Allen,
"Perfect! I really do want to thank you
Allen. I know my wife will love the poem you
have written. Giving jewelry, flowers and the
common anniversary gifts are great but I believe
she will truly be touched by the gift you have
provided. Yes, you may publish it. Again, Thanks! |
2. Work Of Art - At times God excels
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Hi Allen
As far as funerals can go Peter would have loved
his and I could only but feel him there with
us. Listening to the Abba and Grease music we
had instead of hymns followed by the Poem. Hearing
his cheeky laugh as each verse ended. My parents
were overwhelmed with it, everyone loved it
and a lot of people requested copies of it.
I know I have thanked you many times but we
wanted to give Peter a really good send off
to reflect the person he was and you helped
us do that.
I will scan the picture and send it to you asap.
Best regards, Beverley |
3. Miracle On Earth - Against
All Odds
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Hi Allen,
Thank you so much for your first draft. Sorry
that I came back to you just today but I was
in Zimbabwe until yesterday. When I read your
poem tears were running down. I was really touched
and I like it very much. You absolutely found
the right words to express my thoughts and feelings.
You don’t need to do any changes. I love
it as it is. Once again thank you.
If you would like to publish it I don’t
have any problems. Please do.
Best regards, Kerstin |
4. I Realize - First anniversary
in a combat
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Allen,
Sorry I have been out of pocket. We lost two
guys in a helicopter crash Saturday morning.
The poem sounds great. I would like to see if
we can work the second verse just a bit. Here
is an idea let me know what you think.
And so in Iraq, we
wound up at the same place,
and though I lived in a tent with a dirt floor,
it was there we began our long series of Cribbage,
and I think that I am winning, like 500 games
to 4.
Thanks, James |
5. The Steely Dan Plan - Dance
plans for the new father
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It
is unbelievable. I love it!! And I thank you
for making it happen... It is the best gift
I think I will ever give him... |
6. Our Joyful Forge - Poetic
heat
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"...words
can't express how I feel at the moment - the
poem says everything that I want to tell Justin
for our first anniversary..." |
7. The Vision - Parents with
vision, daughter with apology
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"This
is truly a wonderful work of art. You have put
on paper what I have felt for most of my 43
years." |
8. A Soldier's Fortune - The
Reality Of Baghdad
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"I
am not and never have been angry at him for
being in the military." |
9. Lost And Found - Sometimes
love can take some finding...
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"You
are truly talented, thank you so much for this
wonderful gift." |
10. 100+ Letters, 118 Days -
Happy Birthday Soldier
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"He
called me from the UN building in Baghdad..." |
11. Gold Beyond Measure - We have
your love
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"..the
poem was one of the main highlights of the event.
My Parents loved it!!" |
12. Three Bites Is The Rule -
Dinnertime manners for a lifetime
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"The
50th wedding anniversary was wonderful! I think
my parents really enjoyed the poem." |
13. Shining Examples - To Us All
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"Thanks
for the rewrite -- it's perfect!" |
14. Hello, My Knight - Renaissance
Marriage
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"She
spoke them to me straight from her Soul." |
15. The Miracle Child - Thanks
Doc
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"Thank
you so much for this, you truly put my words
together." |
16. Perfect Moments - Spent With
You
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"I've
seen a number of the poems on your site... and
it's easy to tell that you put a lot of effort
into all your poems" |
17. Philly's Shoe, Missing You
- A soldier at war, a wife at home
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"Wow!
It is perfect, I love it" |
18. Perfect Rhyme - and I give
you my soul, my everything...
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"Wanted
to tell you thank you and give you a real big
hug for the poem you wrote me you are the greatest
of all. That poem was the talk of all talks
at my wedding to let you know. It really touched
everyone's hearts." |
19. Dance Then - Wherever You May Be
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I
read "Dance Then" with tear...it's so great,beautiful
spirit and healthy strong mind as my age. What
ever you like to do with this poetry please
do. I don't mine appear my name.I feel honored.
Thanks again,
Hatsumi |
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